FRIDAY FICTIONEERS
Friday Fictioneers is hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Every week we are given a photo prompt and the challenge is to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words based on the prompt.
Here are my 94 words. I really really hope you like my attempt.
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SUFFER THE LITTLE CHILDREN
The old workshop was ideal for him. He could work in peace and no one ever went there, not even when the town’s children started going missing. Why would they? The workshop had been abandoned for years now.
The police said they had no idea if the children were dead or alive.
Oh, they’re alive, he smirked to himself. Barely.
Years ago, ten cruel middle-schoolers and their followers had ruined his school life. Now their children would have to pay.
He smiled and sharpened his knife. Suffer the little children.
Of magic and more 
February 2, 2014 at 6:02 pm
Oh no!But then it is said we pay for the sins of our forefathers,no?A chilling tale of revenge!Poor kids!Loved the title and the different way you went with the prompt-well done Sam:-)
February 2, 2014 at 8:32 pm
Ooh, that’s a scary one. I apologize for everything now.
February 3, 2014 at 1:26 pm
Haha! Thanks 😀
February 3, 2014 at 3:33 am
That is a seriously chilling tale, Sam. And so cleverly told. Well done.
February 3, 2014 at 1:25 pm
Thank you so much 🙂
February 3, 2014 at 5:15 am
I’m reading how children were treated in the time of the Roman Empire’s cruelest moments. It was NOT pretty.
Your submission this week reminded me.
However, I could see you even maybe having fun writing this,
almost like an exerpt from a longer story, say 5,000 words? hehehe!
February 3, 2014 at 1:24 pm
Revenge on the young and innocent is never pretty. Yeah I did feel quite happy writing it though because I’m really too evil for words 😀 thank you for stopping by to read!
February 3, 2014 at 7:12 am
Dark, but good revenge – good story on the prompt picture – I think you could make a good story out of this – I would like to read it! Nan
February 3, 2014 at 1:20 pm
This is so encouraging, thank you 🙂
February 3, 2014 at 9:39 am
Dear Tinkerbelle,
Your are a wicked little fairy, aren’t you? I mean this in a good way. So dark, but so well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
February 3, 2014 at 1:20 pm
Thanks so much for such a wonderful comment 😀 glad you liked it!
February 3, 2014 at 12:20 pm
The story was disturbing, but in the horror genre it would be expected. It was well written. I hope a super detective comes to the rescue of those poor children.
February 3, 2014 at 1:19 pm
I hope so too! Thank you so much for commenting
February 3, 2014 at 2:39 pm
What a chilling story!
February 3, 2014 at 2:40 pm
Thank you so much!
February 3, 2014 at 3:27 pm
Lovely ending to my reading of the FF stories this week…NOT. 🙂 Well-written horror, though.
janet
February 3, 2014 at 3:34 pm
Haha, thanks 😀
February 3, 2014 at 4:15 pm
That was dark and chilling, but a great story!
February 3, 2014 at 4:58 pm
Thank you!
February 3, 2014 at 5:32 pm
Very chilling. The sins of the father often fall to the children to repay. Good story.
February 3, 2014 at 5:33 pm
Thank you!
February 3, 2014 at 7:31 pm
True to life, sadly. Adults should beware of their actions because the children often pay for the wrongs done to others.
February 4, 2014 at 7:17 am
Yes! Thank you for stopping by and commenting 🙂
February 4, 2014 at 5:51 pm
🙂
February 3, 2014 at 8:06 pm
Ouch.. this was one really dark one.. really..
February 4, 2014 at 7:15 am
Thank you!
February 4, 2014 at 3:28 pm
Motive, method, and revenge. You told a good, chilling story here. Kudos.
February 4, 2014 at 5:28 pm
Thank you 🙂
February 4, 2014 at 4:51 pm
you really spun a gruesome tale and written so well my goosebumps shivered in fear. really good, Tink. 🙂
February 4, 2014 at 5:28 pm
Thanks! 😀
February 5, 2014 at 3:48 am
SO… I can’t help but wonder how he was ridiculed as a child and how his crime(s) unraveled.
Always good to leave them wanting more 🙂
February 5, 2014 at 2:32 pm
Haha, the intention was to make you wonder. Thanks for stopping by 🙂
February 5, 2014 at 6:04 am
Now I’m totally creeped out… which means you did your job well. 😉
February 5, 2014 at 2:32 pm
Thank you! 😀
February 5, 2014 at 3:38 pm
Trully chilling. And more so because it’s a credible scenario, a true tale, horrible as that is. It happens.
February 5, 2014 at 4:48 pm
Indeed it is horrible. Thank you for commenting!
February 5, 2014 at 5:07 pm
🙂
February 8, 2014 at 11:25 am
Bad Sam!!!
AnElephant is scared now.
February 9, 2014 at 3:46 pm
Don’t you worry, unless you were one of the bullies! Thanks for stopping by 😀