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Clytie’s Folly

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 This is my submission for the dVerse “Let’s be Fabulists today” challenge. The idea is to write a piece of poetry inspired by any fable of your choice. You can also write your own fable if you like, just be a Fabulist and do it the way you find suitable 😀 Thank you Bjorn for this super-interesting prompt!

I chose the Greek myth of Clytie the sunflower maiden. There are a few versions of the story, I used this one because I like it best. Clytie, a beautiful water nymph falls in love with Sun god Apollo, but he does not return her affections, breaking her heart and causing her much misery. This leads the other gods to pity her and turn her into a sunflower, so she always follows the route of the sun and folds her petals in when the sun sets, thereby proving her everlasting love for Apollo.

CLYTIE’S FOLLY

 

Long ago, a lovely water nymph

Loved a handsome god

And she loved him truly

With a fire never to thaw.

 

She was Clytie with the spun gold tresses

He was Apollo, master of the sun

As arrogant he was, as loving was she

He loved many; for her he was the only one.

 

Luminous and lovestruck, her eyes

Followed him across the azure sky

Never he deigned to cast her a glimpse

Uncaring was he, yet she never questioned why.

 

With his arrival her day began

Hope made her delicate bosom tremble

Yet not once did he look upon her beauty

Never did his strong hands on the reins fumble.

 

“Forget him!”, Clytie’s sisters urged

“He will give you nothing but pain

This obsession will raze you to ashes

In the end nothing of you will remain.”

 

“No”, she insisted, naïve as she was

“He will love me one day soon.”

But the stars would not will it to happen

And Clytie wept for Apollo night, day and noon.

 

The depth of her devotion

Had failed to move the one she desired

But the gods had seen her suffering

And took pity on her situation, for it was dire.

 

Slowly the magic wove itself in patterns

Turning each finger into a soft leaf

Slender waist tapered down into a stem

Petals bloomed on her face, no longer to express grief.

 

The gods had morphed Clytie

She was a flower now, the hue of sunshine

But her lovely golden face

would still follow the sun

She could not speak her sorrow,

 But for his love she would always pine.

 

 

 

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Author: tinkerbelle96

Hi! I'm Sam, an 18 year old certified mad chick who likes to imagine that she can write. I live in India, a colourful, diverse country which is sadly getting polluted everyday by more and more violence....something no citizen can be proud of. I enjoy reading-basically horror, watching romcoms and horror flicks(yes, again horror, my favourite being Sinister- its psychotic just like me), eating( food, oh yes, I love foooooood), attending college, and most of all(oh, do stay and listen a while longer) I love animals. I have periodic urges to own and look random "pets". Currently I wish to own a baby elephant, which I will name Thama. I write to express what I feel, to keep that small creative bone alive in my body, and to make readers happy. I hope you like what I write!

11 thoughts on “Clytie’s Folly

  1. oy. heart wrenching to ave such a love and never have it returned
    not an easy destiny either…now to follow the sun and not be able to
    give voice to the sorrow…

    ha. just saw your bit on wanting a baby elephant
    that would be cool.

  2. oh heck…what a sad story.. at least she can follow his moves and enjoy some of the warmth… though it’s tough when love is not answered…

  3. A sad story for sure.. but one that is also bittersweet in a way.. she could forever follow her loved one as he moved across the sky…

  4. How devoted she is till the end ~ I love the transformation to a sunflower, forever following and pining for the sun ~

    Wonderfully penned ~

  5. Oh,how sad to be in such a position-unrequited love is sad but sadder is not to have any love in your heart-like Apollo,who never loved I think-only lusted-thus the race for capturing the attention different women-sigh!Excellent writing and loved the rich imagery-the poem just blossomed in front of my eyes:-)

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